Adverbs to start sentences
- quickly.
- significantly.
- cautiously.
- firstly.
- importantly.
- remarkably.
- similarly.
- surprisingly.
- readily.
- curiously.
- concerningly.
- interesting.
- confusingly.
- consequently.
- shocking.
- ironically.
curiously,they walked past the constitution site.
shockingly, i was early to school.
begin with a preposition.
- in.
- against.
- before.
- between.
- over.
- behind.
- within.
- under.
- below.
- at.
- for.
- throughout.
- near.
- about.
About, 10% of the ocean is plastic.
within 11 years, the world wont be able to sustain humanity
Basic body paragraph
P-point (state the point you want to make) e.g Martha is bullied at school
throughout the novel 'abomination' Martha is bullied at school.
E-Evidence(provide evidence to support your point with 2-3 sentences)
e.g an example of this is the incident with the girls throwing water over the toilet stall onto Martha. when she came put of the stall they punched her in the stomach and called her a slut,this made Martha angry and upset
E-explain(explain what your point demonstrated; 2 sentences)
e.g unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bullying by students towards Martha. there was an imbalance of power between Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them.
L-link(write a sentence linking to the next paragraph)
e.g Another way Martha experiencing suffering is at the hands of her parents and the church of the Righteous
